Reviews for The child |
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Callum Runchman chapter 15 . 7/22 This was a nice story at the beginning but I got lost during the start of the quest and lost interest if I'm honest. I was really hoping this would be one of those fairly peaceful stories that arny chocked full of drama and action (quests and Zeus being a major D***) |
brigham.west11 chapter 1 . 5/24 Guten Nacht It guten tacht |
PercyBLUE chapter 5 . 8/8/2018 LOVE the last minute chat and Grover oh my Gods SO FUNNY |
Chancamazing chapter 4 . 2/19/2017 Pothena all the way! Boo Athena and Ares! But I like the story. |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/7/2016 yeah i just rembered it so here it is. F****** Aphrodite is trying to get then close. P.S. i see whant you did there when you put lindsay in there as well as james (; wink. |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/7/2016 LoL I was just about to tell you something liked about this chapter and then forgot lol ! :) |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/7/2016 i just felt lazy so wrote like that just saying |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/7/2016 that momnent when alex and slyvaana met each other that made me lol (: |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/7/2016 Yeah i am a pertimis fan but the ares athena is creepy and made go ewwh and shiver! |
Please please chapter 15 . 4/11/2016 Are you ever gonna write more I've been waiting for like 4 years |
Death's Huntrer chapter 3 . 4/10/2016 How dare you play lol dota is ten times better |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2016 what is the prequel of sequel of this? please post the reply in the newest story. |
observer21 chapter 4 . 7/1/2015 Wow things for Sylvania are getting heavy |
PoseidonPrince chapter 15 . 1/1/2015 hmm you are making syl love a painted story, an artificiality, not formed from heart just a planted and please stop all these triangle love story and alice character is really good and remaining story is all good |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/31/2014 Begging is not spelt like begging and I know it was not a keyboard mistake because you did it twice |