Oh god. Nope, nope, nope. You are dragging me back to this fandom with this piece of work. Good lord my otp and this is beautiful.

Very good, I loved reading it. I don't really ship Clive/Flora, but I think the relationship between the two - whatever it may be - is interesting, and I just love both characters. You captured both well :)

The fact Clive didn't hurt her supports what the Professor said in the end, how he suspected Clive was really a true gentleman. The ending exchange between Luke and the Professor is a nice touch. Well done!

Very neato nasty plot