This review is not in reference to the story, but the final author note on the final chapter. The way you left it open was quite honestly better than a lot of the fanfiction I've read that have attempted to do similar, as it realistically has them flying off into a new horizon. Did you leave untied loose ends? Yes. Yes there were many unanswered questions that could be answered, but instead of quitting, you set a foundation. A foundation for another writer to work and build off of for a sequel, much like how they do in the comics.
For a while I was actually afraid this would turn into a harem crap fic and become dull. Not to knock on the harem genre but there are a lot that just write a male/4619 females with no rhythm or rhyme as to why which gets really boring, and full honesty, you did make kal-el out to be some sort of Adonis. One look and any girl swooned, no romance, until batgirl and canary and even then it was minimal at said, you did show one thing I've not seen in most of the fics I've read, relationship squabbles. That was insightful as it made it feel more realistic.

Looked forward to reading this story, since the idea sounds interesting. But lost interest because the story has started to become less about Clark becoming Superman and more about Batgirl having girl talk with Black Canary and Huntress.

Batgirl suddenly started to dominate the chapters and there hasn't even been given any reason as to how she's related to Clark and his story at all. It's almost as if you're writing two different stories at once, but only advertised about the one.

Your story is a nightmare

Really curious to see how Clark will react to finding out he has a child, and I wonder if the mother will let him be in the child’s life

I think you do a great job and humanizing Superman

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter.

I can’t blame Clark either LOL.

Kind of feel bad about Ivy now LOL

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter

An enjoyable first chapter

I'm really enjoying this but I have to ask, why are you making Clark so weak? Grundy couldn't even budge him, let alone break bones and even with Clark not knowing how to fight he moves nearly as fast as the flash so any attack coming his way would be like in super, super slow mo so even if he doesn't know how to block properly he could easily move out of the way

This was a pretty good story and I enjoyed it from start to finish. As well as the epilogue. Almost thought they had both broken up officially.

Honestly tho, Ivy is a good person

Well this story is nice and all except for the fact all the men are pushovers and the women act like assholes. Not my cup of tea.

I feel like your having to much going on in this story, there’s like 5 different plots going on that i can barely keep track.