Not gonna lie i cried at the end... Good job :)

I fucking hate the ending. I fucking hate the ending so bad i literally wanna gouge my eyes out in sheer frustration. I love drarry and all but I HATED harry's portrayal of character here. Yeah he's his usual self-sacrificing idiot-BUT TO THAT EXTENT?! ARE U FUCKING KIDDING ME?! And yeah all was alive and well but THEY SHOULD'VE STAYED DEAD.
i LOVED the fucking story but i HATED the ending.
IT DOESN'T BODE ME WELL THAT THE DEAD ARE ALIVE AND THE ALIVE ARE DEAD OR SUFFERING FROM A MENTAL DISORDER.
I hate harry in this fic. I loved draco though...

Always..

I almost cried, you wrote so well I felt Draco's anguish and sadness. This deserves way more reviews :'(

This fiction ruined me in a good way and i loved every second of this.I remember i had a story idea in my head before in which harry sacrifises himself for other's happiness and i really wanted to read something like this. So its like you literally read my mind and im so in love with this. Its even better because i love and ship Drarry so much, so to add this ship in this beatifull heartbreaking story is just... I love this! Please keep writting dont give up with what you do!
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Wow I never read something like this (and I read a lot of fan fiction) its truly incredible. The plot is so original especially how you manage to write the plot about something the actual harry will do .I love it

Amazing story

Damn, that was dpressing. Well written, intrigueing concept, but wholly depressing.

I really loved reading your story, thank you :)

I must say wow! I really enjoyed this! So not what I had been expecting, but truelly much better! Thanks!

KCK-Lumcer

I just noticed this masterpiece has just a couple of reviews, which is a shame as loads of terrible written stuff on this site have tons of them. So here goes, the first time in my ten years of reading ff: another review just to increase your review count. This story will stay with me for awhile.

It's mindboggling at times, heartwrenching, there is some mystery and angst and love and some magical theory and (here I stop). Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

excellent story though it tears me apart

Clever last line!

I really loved this story to bits. I felt sorry that Draco didn't feel enough connection even to his son to remain living... in fact, I thought Scorpius toasting Harry instead of Neville would be what convinced Draco to return. And Scorpius's well-adjusted reaction felt odd, although the way he explains it is logical, and it looks as though his mother and grandmother stepped into the breach.

The only thing that consistently bugged me was the tense changes throughout. Sometimes it's past tense you're using here, but it often slips to present. I found that jolted me out of the story more than once.

Still, I really felt like I 'got' Draco's despair, and you handled the flashbacks - to me, an 'advanced technique', so easy to screw up - very well. It was never unclear when you were in the 'now' and when you were discussing the start of Draco's and Harry's relationship; and the flashbacks felt necessary, too, informing the present.

I'd recommend passing this off to a beta to clean up the tense-shifts, but the story was posted awhile ago and I know I lose all desire to nitpick after something's been posted awhile. :)

Thanks so much for writing and posting! I truly enjoyed it. :D

-Kirinin

Interesting story. XD

This is brilliant, I was in a constant state of "oh-my-gosh" throughout this whole fic. I like the plot of how it all happened (magic-wise), and I also really like your Scorpious. I think it would be really cool if someone found those papers of Draco's and published them- as fiction, hence the birth of the HP novels... Okay, looking way too far into this. Anywhoo, I adored all your characterisations- kudos for a great story!