Once Alex Blake arrives (Emily's replacement) I would love to read your take on what she feels as she's tries to find her place on the team. One thing I think that you do extremely well is uncover the many layers of a character. Where others, including myself, get stuck on the surface, you're able to bury down deep and find their insecurities, strengths and motivations. I loved this whole story but you really nailed Elle and Emily. ;-)

I truly enjoyed this piece. You took the time to flesh out some rather over looked characters. You gave everyone strong, believable character development, as well as a sense of closure to the characters. Thanks for posting this one.

So beautifully creepy and sad. It brings the characters that do seem forgotten some much needed thought and closure.

Ashley was gloriously perfect and Elle felt exactly like Elle (and unfortunately haven't seen seasons 4 and 5 so I don't Jordan at all). They both felt 100% percent in character and I loved their ruminations on the team; I loved the way you gave us more insight into Ashley, and Elle felt exactly like herself - in both good ways and bad. I also really liked the format, it flowed really well and wasn't at all hard to keep track of - which was helped a lot by how well you captured their different voices.

Wow.. This was amazing.. Truly wonderful job(:

You know, I actually like Elle... but that's so not the point xD

Anyways, I really admire you for writing this using all the forgotten members of the BAU as your main characters, since writing with chracters that aren't "fan favourites" is definitely a test of both skill and imagination. Your take on all three was a refreshing change on the unnecessary Seaver/Todd hate out there (strangely, there isn't all that much ranting about Elle), which I occasionally partake in and your swift transitions from perspective to perspective were quite smooth! All in all, this was a well written story. Thumbs up! :)

Loved this. You wrote the thoughs very well and it was very easy to tell who was who. I love all of those non fan favorites and thanks for giving them a story. Great job!

The shame of this story is that because you chose unpopular characters, not very many people will read and review, and that is their loss. It is a fine story that realistically portrays the feelings and situations of the characters. ~Dee

Awesome! Your story is a great portrayal not only of the three characters Elle, Ashley and Jordan but of the TEAM.

I will admit when I read your author notes I nearly didn't read any further due to the characters, however I'm glad I did. I found the format confusing to begin with, but once I got my head round it the piece was really insightful, both of the characters and the team.

WOW. This is brilliant - so clever, complex but also follow-able and a cracking read! I like the Elle one best, especially the bit about her parents. Seriously well done :)