damn hinata a rough one here

Yup, completely ruined now. I wish I could wipe everything I've read until now from my brain. It's honestly relieving to know the author stopped writing on here... Harsh I may be as I also write, rape is like the worst thing I could ever read about, especially when there was no warning. Even then, the fact it was done just so those two could be 'easily ' cut from the story... yeah, complete trash.

basically hitomi is basically tsunade as a kid without the gambling habbit

i cant wait to see little asuma also picks out orange and starts pulling pranks

Great story please continue writing it soon

Well, I actually have a idea but it might be too evil. Brainwashing them to be Naruto's sex slave. With Anko and Kurenai joining in, what do you think, Evil, right?

shame this seems to be dead

I feel sorry for that anbu

i wouldnt blame naruto kurenai, little asuma was hungry and all the first thing that naruto did was took him to get sime ramen

I liked the story and hope that you will write more

I actually liked this chapter and I hope that Naruto will remember the incident some how maybe with the help of Kyuubi but it's an idea

I'm liking the story but one thing that you need to work on is the back and forth between characters cause it kinda felt that I was reading a play but other than that I can't wait to read more

I agree!

FIRST CHAPTER IS COMPLETE SHIT! !

Story is excellent so far I do hope it continues even though I can see it's been 6 years since it's been updated I really do enjoy is Naruto anko stories I hope this story doesn't end the way so many others do and end without an ending.