You know I am up for lemons... but every chapter does not need them, life does move on with someone’s cock or pussy being licked or fucked.

Sometimes it just is too much that it turns your reader off! And then it getting explained in both point of views!

Sometimes a story just need more substance the cock and pussy! Your story has reached my limit of turning me off! I don’t usually give up on stories, but in the last few chapters Bella is sick from morning sickness, high blood pressure and no amount of neediness is going to want this woman to want Edwards cock!

Let’s be realistic, I know it’s fiction, but still some sort of reality needs to be mixed in, she is in the early stages of pregnancy... blimey!

Thank and good luck, but I am tapping out!

Excellent

it is absolutely perfect. I loved every bit of it. Thank you for making me laugh and cry with it. I really couldn't put it down till the finish.

Muy buena historia ! Me gusto mucho

Yes I'm reading this story again, it is one of my favorite. I absolutely love Bella's "Inner Bad girl" and "Inner Good girl" monologues. I know you will probably never add to this story in any way but doing outtakes of her "voices" giving play by play of some of the sexual shenanigans would be priceless!

Good job!

Great work so far! Bella would be matron of honor since she's married :)

For the wedding chapter weren't the grandparents paired wrong?

I've reread the story for a second time, and as much as I love it I was left wanting a little more. I still say it needs a epilogue. Even after all these years.

I really enjoyed this story. I only felt it was missing a epilogue. The lat chapter just felt a little rushed. But it was wonderful!

WOW.. Edward knows how to give all the best presents.

I loved the wedding vows.

Still loving this story, so romantic.

So far I love this story.

Thank you for a wonderful read abk