| Reviews for Fun in the Sun |
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   Bethylee chapter 1 . 2/14/2014 LOL That was great! And SO like Murphy too! :P |
| nerdsdoitbetter chapter 1 . 3/5/2013 hehe. cute! I could hear the accents perfectly! :D |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012 It's a fun story. My critiques are... To be a little more discriptive. When murp is yelling, how is he yelling? what is he yelling? Lastly, unless he's doing a John Wayne impression I don't think murph is going to be saying "over yonder". |
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 aww i loved this! seriously, i'm like smiling from ear-to-ear. this is def. my new favorite movie, and this one of my new favorite fanfictions :) |
| hotstep122 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012 lol |
| BohemianRebel chapter 1 . 10/31/2011 I really like this short little story, because I can really imagine the brothers saying the things you made them say, something that I think is really important for a good story. The dialogue is completely believable! Love it! |
| Crow22 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 love it |
| DJFireHawk chapter 1 . 9/4/2011 LMAO...I can totally see the boys doing that. Especially mischievous Murphy. Excellent job. |
| Eilis Rabadi chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 Very, very cute story. I truly enjoyed it. |
| xPoppyx chapter 1 . 7/18/2011 I was rolling! This was so funny and perfect! I could totally see the brothers having a water fight :P |
| TwilightBrightStar chapter 1 . 7/17/2011 YOU POSTED IT! I loved it. I am happy... |
