I really like it! May I translate it into Russian, please? Of course, with all the links are credits to your original story :)

Very sweet story!

Sup Nicole! Anyway, I want to get it out of the way that was really nice and I'm sure you saw what my emotions were doing as I read this, seeing as you are sitting right in front of me. I though characterization was really nice, I could picture exactly how Jack looked at that part where his eyes were shiny every time they were alone together. Like, after all the emotional build up coming down to that line, I could see his face, like you described the way he looked without really using any words. Like the way he looked in that moment was something you had to feel (or Joseph had to feel) rather than see. You know what I mean? Idk man sorry my emotions are all over the place. But this was nice 'showing and not telling' stuff! Idk I'll

Get back to this later.