MY GOD, LOOK AT THIS DUDE. He’s in TOTAL DENIAL the whole time malwqlqkskdkdjd Whatever he says, that boy is a freaking dork. YOUR Natsu is a dork (which is superb okay). The scenes you set were all really adorable, I couldn’t get enough! That scene where he kinda-rejected-but-not-really to Lucy was precious as hell, from the way she screamed at him her confession to the way he breezily walk away as a badass (or so he thought, jeez, dork). Also, your idea of he kept reminding her how he totally doesn’t believe in love at first sight (even if he himself is a victim skdkdkdj) is just such an original and interesting idea! Love and points to you!

I’d 100% wanna see more works from you!
P/s: your nalu is one of a kind and wonderful and sweet and amazing and in character, great job 3

Also, i did see that sneaky drink choice he mentioned she liked, ohoho.

Nawww, this is kinda cute and funny XD A bit to short for my opinion, that could be a bigger story. But I like it :3

Thank you for ever thinking of writing this down into words, because I am fucking grateful for blessing my eyes with this

Oh god this is so cute and adorable i LOVE THIS SO MUCH

It's insanely good and totally not cliché. I have this huge face-splitting grin right now and I don't think it's going to wear off anytime soon. Thanks to you. Really love it. Kudos.

super cute, frickin adorable, natsu's such a pansy, really

*awwwe* so cute.

Hehe I love this! It's very realistic, and I love the idea! I love how Natsu keeps track of the times they meet. I really like the scenes that you put, and well, I just love it! Good work on this story, and the idea is so adorable! I love it I love it I love it! :)

Aww, cute! I liked it :)

cute

AWWWWWWWWW! That was SO freaking romantic and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!
Straigth to my fav's, yeah :3

Ha. You have taken the whole "chocolate eyes" phenomenon to a whole new level of awesome. Originality. This is what I'm seeing. Truffles. On fire. HaHAhAHAHAHAGhjksadgk
Nice concept and execution, you.

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Oh god this is so perfect that i
just
can't
Deep breaths, Amenah.

Fucking hell woman you can damn well write a story.

Oh God, the plastic ring line just killed me. I think I might be dying of laughter. FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC! And hilarious. This is why I love the Fairy Tail fandom, theres always so much humor, awesome!