Reviews for Permission
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
hooo que lista vĂ­bora saco en claro y dio sus bendiciones me gusto haaa
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
Wow, you write really really well, especially since English isn't even your native language.
Netbug009 chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
Cute! There were a fair amount of errors, though, like you said. Perhaps find a beta reader who is a native English speaker to smooth those things out?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Adorable! Poor Viper, she probably wouldn't get much girl-talk. Very cute!
nieve chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
hay si que atraparon a tigresa
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
jajaj esa bibora jaja si atraparon al tigre con la guardia baja
byrdqamar36 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Love please make a new one please
dracopoet chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
i really wish this would continue more, this is gold. you got a 10/10 from me. i hope you keep writing like this.
WolfSpirit223 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
that was really good and funny
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
This is the best kfp story I have read! I loved it so much! Everything was so funny and perfect! I would love more!
Gdown94 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
This is a great story. I'm impressed that none of the characters were even slightly OOC, as is often the case in fan fics. The story was charming and clever. I enjoyed it.

By the way, you did a wonderful job for English not being your native language. Far better than a good many native English speakers I know...
AloneBlueRose chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
lol nice job man
queerstarks chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I loved this, it made me laugh. You're stories are adorable! And I'm not one for any kind of crossover, in all honesty.
monkeycyborgninja chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
This was a good story, I enjoyed reading it, the overall plot was really good. I liked how you made Tigress feel awkward about the subject and how she fell of the peak when Viper mentioned mating LOL. As for crossovers I love them, but only when I like both the things that are being crossedover. In fact I'm currently working on a Kung Fu Panda/Mortal Kombat crossover, check it out if you want.
DC55 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I loved it. Such a cute story,please write more :)
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