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OH GOD WHAT IF ASSASSIN IS SHIROU’S DAD

After like nearly a year of reading this story on and off I’ve finally finished everything published so far. And now I sorta wish I hadn’t cause I’ll have to wait for updates just like everyone else :(. Happy belated birthday, by the way.

I feel bad for any Magus who summons FFD Shirou, what with him standing up to Lorelei of all people on a regular basis and (mostly) getting away with it. I wonder how long it'd be before they use a command seal to chain him down for a brief period of time, or end up being screwed over by him (if they aren't a nice person like Ritsuka that is).

Haha about time someone mentioned that Waver didn't need the grail to grow a few cms like rider suggested

I love your story, can't wait for next chapter!Hope you come back soon!

And makes Tokiomi look like even more of an idiot

Am I the only one that thinks it's sadder that Sakura learned more magecraft from Rin than she did from zouken as that was the point of giving her to the matou

More than half the time Kiritsugu is mentioned it feels like the reactions are somewhat forced. Otherwise your writing has gotten a lot better throughout.

Dude. You can't say you despise killing as you kill a bunch of people. You say you regret killing. If you said Hitler despised killing but killed a lot because he thought it for the best then he isn't despising killing. To despise killing you at least have to avoid it. Otherwise you just regret killing.

Giving Shirou the magus killer title is silly when you consider he's only killed vampires so far.

Saying you're worried that you'll be poisoned to the person is pretty rude. Extremely rude.

Shirou explaining all this seems a bit off. I doubt Kiritsugu would be inclined to explain his motives and people actually believing him is very questionable. In all likelihood his explanation won't change many people's opinions and he's wasting his time.

I'm unreasonably altruistic is not something people will say. Outside of the phrase sounding stupid it also sounds vain. Like saying I'm too virtuous or I'm too kind. It just sounds too vain to actually say.

This bullying nonsense and fighting at school sounds ridiculous. That's not even really a thing in America. I imagine Japan is even stricter.

Shirou must find that special scabbard to rest in. Lol, that sounds like an innuendo. Anyways, I don't really think Kiritsugu would be so outspoken about his reasoning or his actions.