Ooooohhhhhhhhh lovely lovely lovely LOVELY! Love it.
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I'm really enjoying this! It's written very well, and I can definitely feel the characters developing while still maintaining their character (sounds confusing, but you know what I mean). Great job!

Thank you for posting. I greatly enjoyed your story.

This was a very interesting story, well done.

Such a wonderful story! Well done!

Aww I loved it you did the characters justice. Good job!

An excellent story..

This was a lovely story and I devoured it today when I was supposed to be working. I just couldn't put it down. I like the way you write Jareth, at once regal, arrogant and slightly damaged. Great story.

I loooved it. I stayed up ungodly late to read it all. I got very much wrapped up in the story and yeah. I hope you continue your writing. You have good plots AND good grammar. Such a rare, glorious thing. So, thank you very much!

I'm glad you're enjoying Japan! It sounds like it was a big move for you. Me, I'm still living at the place I was born at, never lived anywhere else.

i think you captured jareth very well in the line, "It seems that I cannot fulfill your request." that is so like him, to sound royally dignified while admitting, without really admitting, that he cant do something. :)

I absolutely loved this. You are truly amazing.

loved this story, stayed great from start to finish...had to sit all afternoon and read it instead of napping, but it was worth my time! :)

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Amazing awesomeness! I loved your story! But I think that one more chapter would sum it up it lived it loved t loved it I'm gonna do this forever loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it'!

Jareth lay against the back of the sofa, breathing hard, and looked over at Sarah and sighed. "I swear to the gods that you will be the unravelling of me for a second time."

Loved, loved, loved this line.