In response t my other two comments, nevermind, apparently i found the sequel to your OTHER Psychic!Shawn story

Since i can't make more than one comment on a chapter i'll put it here: I checked your account and saw the sequel, thank youuuuuuuuuu 3

Bicth when's the sequel? I need more of this, this be the good stuff {insert the 'just right' meme} 3

Not gonna lie, I don't like the last chapter. But just the last one! All of the other chapters are incredible. I stayed up into the obscene hours of the morning reading the other chapters, and it was worth every second, but the very last chapter doesn't mesh with the rest of the story at all. But this is your story, and this is just one little person's opinion. I know this is a pretty old fic, and if you ever see this, know that you wrote an amazing story.

Rereading, this is great

Im so confused cause I can't rationalize in'n'out with alcohol/nice restaurant things

I'm really enjoying this fic, it's fun and well written, so thanks!

So, I really like the story, but I don't really get what Sarah's purpose is. Being a dishonorable fanfiction veteran, I get worried whenever an attractive woman gets introduced/artificially injected into the story... And she has inhuman traits, such as instant trusting kindness, unnatural bonding skills, kind of a pushover, it's like, could you basically kidnap her just by asking kindly to stay at your house? ...The main character acts completely unlike himself around her (Which, yes, to a certain degree makes sense, is passable, but demanding she stay with him and his buddy for no real reason (Why would anything happen to her? He might as well start taking in bums for the same reason), and the fact that he already has a girlfriend, I figure maybe you're going to have her fall in love with Ryan, kicking out this Becky chick we never met... I just hope this isn't turning into a harem fic. They're hopelessly boring, and pretty much kill any potential the story had. It's also never believable, and it's awkward because it's always written like one big happy family that just happens to fuck eachother.).
I do like Ryan though. I worried about him at first, but he's sorta grown on me. It could change, but for now I think he's great.
I like the story idea by the way. There aren't very many stories like this, which is surprising!
Keep in mind, this isn't me trying to rag on you, or tell you how I would do the story, these are just constructive criticisms of mine, as the reader. And a frequent victim of horrible fantasy fics recoiling in apprehension and terror at the first sign that things might quickly go awry. You have a good thing going here, and I'm rooting for you, I wanna remember your story as a great story.

Uhhh...different ending

HAHA!

Awesome sauce.

keep it !1

enjoyed this

Aww, I was hoping he got a new power.

Did he bring him back!?

Keep it up, hope its a good