Absolutely loved this!

Really well done...deftly paced and pitched :-)

Cute story! I would love to see a picture of the boys in their undercover disguises!

Awesome.. Fantasic ... Outstanding... fanfiction! Actually I don't have words to tell how phenomenal the story was! Each of the 4 chapters was written to the best. The last paragraph of chapter 1 made me go nuts... I truly enjoyed it each and every word.
And your humour rocks! Really would love to see this story in the actual show...
P.S: A wish from your crazy fan requesting more Hawaii five 0 fanfics (with danny whump ;) )

Sweet. I really liked it. Had me going there for a while in the first chapter but I totally guessed it. I actually had a similar story in mind and then I read this. Huh. Five-0 must attract this kind of plot. :)

-EmpressAkitla

WOW! That was really good. I really thought the worst. Glad it turned out like it did.
I loved the McGarrittis.

amazing!

*thunderous applause* The peanut gallery rejoices!

Read this story ages ago, and just stumbled across it again here on my lunch and can I just say "Evil" cliffie here on ch 2!

Oh Danny and Steve! What would I do without you two in my life? LOL GREAT STORY! :D

Nocturniquette

brilliant :)

love McGarrett

Nice story and very well written.
I am very ashamed to admit that I was going to quit it in the middle of the first chapter, insulting you for not putting a warning of character death and even thinking Danny was out of character for killing Steve.
When I realised it was a trick, you captured completely my attention until the end.
Nicely done.
Deb

very nice :p

Oooh, twisty! Well, of course I knew he really wouldn't kill Steve. Five-0 certainly has made some good friends, to have all the help they did with their plan. Loved Fiesty Grace, too, biting Cage on the hand. Woot!