I feel so conflicted because I was rooting for Mori the whole time but Hunny was a good "second" choice (haha) I've never read 40 chapters so fast! Well done.

This was amazing

Cute way to end it but I was hoping for kyoya

love it

Okay. This just isn't okay and really kind of rapey. Like, no means no is a thing, and it's just not cool and really unnecessary to the story in my opinion. It makes this hard to read to the point I skim over Hikaru's chapters.

Hot damn! That was so heated and beautiful! I love Kyoya and Haruhi together!

It was a nice story. But for some reason, I was disappointed. I wanted her to end up with Kyouya. Maybe it's because they're my OTP but the way the story went, it was wow.

There are some points that the story made me uncomfortable. Some sex scenes seemed rushed. Like the first time with Mori. And he just put it in. I know there were rules but, it's her first time. Couldn't they just give her a great first time? Then with Tamaki?

Then Hikaru's fetish with S&M. I couldn't help my mind but to drift towards Fifty Shades of Grey. It would have been okay but Haruhi wasn't willing. He should have spent a few minutes trying to talk to her into trying it and making sure that she would like it so that they would be able to do it again in their next session.

I like what Kaoru did to Hikaru though. At least he already knew what it felt like. I was thinking that that should have been his punishment when he first did it. So that he would be all like "LESSON LEARNED. I'm sorry."

This is just my opinions. You can ignore it if you like but I just wanted to voice it out. :)

It was kinky and smutty. I like it :D Keep it up.

Great story - but I wished she had ended up with Mori!

Not that I don't love kink in stories, believe me I do, but I would like to see it portrayed correctly with proper negotiations and limits set. So many kinky things are portrayed as just the unwillingness of one person being taken advantage of when in all actuality, that is never the case-if it is, it was predetermined by both parties involved. Then again, that is when kink is liked by both parties and they are being responsible about this whole thing. If it is meant to be used as punishment and torture, then by all means...please continue. :-)

just boring

I was hoping she would tell Hikaru to untie her, get the fuck out of her house and never come near her again unless he wanted a carving knife in the gut.

Loved this chapter! It was so funny with the whole Mother-Daughter day thing turned into The Family-Day thing. I was LMAO! It was funny! And it was brilliantly written too. :)

This story was FABULOUS.
But..could she like pick all of them bc they're all perfect for her in a way?
Just kidding! I know you can't re-write the story, and Hunny is my favorite anyways (;
But I just love the whole group together so so so much (: you did a wonderful job writing this.

Omg... That was... (I can't express it with words) it was amazing, awesome, and beautifully written. Thank you so much. I cried at the end. Its MOE! XD Haruhi x Honey is my reverse harem. 3 thank you for writing this.

lmao That Was so Cute