... what just happened...? i think ... you breaked my brain...

Hahaha! Hun, your writing style is definitely improving as you continue writing. I like the descriptive words you've been adding to your writing (such as describing Alucard's voice as sultry, you are bang on about that). You're definitely getting better, and I'm proud. I think the Pokemon reference definitely made the story, well done, be happy with your work :)