oh how I love popculture references... Any way not to quote Rainbow Dash or anything but "this story is undinably unputdownable!" I can't wait for more because I need MORE.

AWW Granny Pie... Apple Jack might be really uncomfortable meating that dull of a family expecially after Pinkie Apple Pie she could be related to them! HAhAhHAHAHAHAHA

That, was so, AWESOME! Sorry for channelling Rainbow for a second there, But your story was pretty funny. I really like the ending.

I wish you luck in all your future stories!

Oh the pun, it burns, it burns!
No actually it was good. Keep it up.

Those were quite awesome c

Rainbow and coffee.. I like that.

Dude. If you don't think Snow White is scary, you didn't watch the whole thing. It's been Grade A high octane nightmare fuel for generations.

I love this! My favorite was the Rarity and Fluttershy bit. Also, can't go wrong with Twilight bashing! (As in the book, not Twilight Sparkle :P

Keep writing! Can't wait for an update!

Ha. Love it.

Last time she drank a cup of coffee, she kept circling Ponyville for three days straight."

Brilliant!