nice, but the formatting could be less clunky.

A well written story with interesting results, while I was hoping for some romance at the end but it's fine.

Enjoyable story, but sad with the way no one, except for Ryouga, seems to ever catch on that Ranma is weak and still recovering from his injuries. I really liked some of your other stories that are not posted here, but still can be found archived and hoped I you had continued. Thanks again for what you have provided.

This story moved me to tears. I'm serious... ( I don't think even Shampoo, Akane, Mousse etc. would be so insensitive as to NOT notice Ranma's being weak... but I'm glad at least Ryouga understood. I'll now go watch some Ranma episodes or OAVs in which Ranma gets squished, flattened malletted etc. and gets up like nothing happened. But I sure won't forget your story...

Good story, plot, character building, and good side characters (having the kids he saved visit was a nice touch.)

For those who think Ranma would just shrug off a fully loaded 18 wheeler hitting him, get real.

Ranma is really, really tough, but he isn't Superman! Also Energy blasts don't break bones like the

hundreds of tons of mass a fully loaded 18 wheeler hits with. Think Physics! You'll have to ask someone good

at physics about the exact calculations though. In the meantime, lighten up.

As I said in the other fic I reviewed, your write is good, but I don't like the fic.

Use some other anime for this fic, because its unrealistic in this anime's terms. I'm agreeing with what Nemesis Zero said. Ranma by the end of the manga(I assume this is end of manga) is exceptionally strong.

Ranma manage to survive one of Saffron's energy blast... even though half of it is blocked. Ranma also asked Ryoga to shoot him with the shishi hokodan so Ranma's body can be projected into the Phoenix tap and break it with his body(though the phoenix tap was made of some strong material so it didn't break, Ranma just got slammed into it really hard)...

With all that... a mere 18 wheeler shouldn't do much...

OMG that was abosolutly AMAZING, It took me three days to read but it was worth it. KEEP WRITEING OR I WILL COME AFTER YOU! THIS IS A PROMISE!

very good starting premise... but you really lost me when the second accident happened. i mean, come on! couldn't you have thought of something just a bit better than yet another trafic accident? besides, i almost can't believe that an 18-wheeler doing 70 would do more than just knock him out by the end of the manga. he's throwing around (and getting hit by) multiple ton boulders in the saffron fight, and he just get's dazed for a second!

other than these complaints, i thought the fic was pretty darned good.

Why must the best stories be so sad... maybe because there more realistic but still there sad... Oh well this storie is one of the greatest I read and I read a lot so maybe writing more or writing an alterne one where the nerima people are actually intelligent enough to understand ranma's situation... or something else I don't know just write more because you write so well!

It's an okay story line. Not great or lousy. I do have to say that I thought the 'MegaTokyo' reference was funny. I could just see Largo scrambling up that cliff. Too bad he didn't fall back down it.

Largo, Piro an Seraphim? Heh. A MegaTokyo fan,huh? Too bad Ping, Dom and Ed weren't with them... :)

An excellent story! The only thing that really upset me about this story is the lack of karmic balance: when are the Nerima Wrecking Crew going to have to reap what they've sown? Ranma gets dumped on throughout the story, and in the end the NWC still doesn't recognize their part in it.

Oh, yes. Another thing. That last brawl before the epilogue. Herb would not be there, nor would he participate in a free for all against Ranma. Indeed, seeing as how Herb owes Ranma a life-debt for Ranma saving his life, Herb would be far more likely to defend Ranma than contribute to the beating.

This was pretty good, though I think you might have made the fighting in Nerima a bit much. Most everyone tended to tone it down when ranma was injured, not get worse than ever. Other than that this was pretty good.

I am very impressed by this work. It is among the ten best written fanfiction works I have ever read. I encourage you to continue writing as you have an obvious skill at telling stories.

a truly nice piece of work! a welcome change after reading so many crappy fics out there (skimming over them, mostly). it would be cool to read what happened in between the 2nd accident and the epilogue, but that's up to you. you write good, so i hope to see more of your work soon! bye bye!