I fucking loved it!You did a great job!

I loved it! So funny to see their reactions, just brilliant!

Great story! I loved it and found it all very realistic

great story loved it

Cute story but you mention that Fred asks a question then you reference him as dead.
"Harry, could you please repeat that?" Fred was looking a bit confused.

But the fact remains the adults were NEVER there to protect them! They had to do it themselves, when then they asked for help they were brushed off, and an abused child has a hard time trusting adults! And they ARE adults now finished school and having their own lives, Harry and hermionie especially NO ONE there had the right to dictate what they should or should not do! Nice work!

LOL!

interesting story :)

Hmm - and what about the punishments? I thought it a little ridiciulous that Minerva was having list, but making a list and then not even mentioning it anymore doesn't feel right. Not that I think they should be punished, I just wanted it to be mentioned again - also Hermiones parents. To me it seems like the real end is missing - what do the adults do with all their new knowledge. I'd be especially interested in Minerva.

I really think the idea of this story is hilarious and I'm also glad it's not always funny.
I like Hermione apologizing to McGonagall.
One thing however - sometimes I don't know which person is talking. It'd be easier if you put a ...", Ron said. Or ..." Minerva said. behind every direct talk.
These are your thoughts so for you it's obvious who talks, but for other people not so much. Maybe not even for yourself when reading after some time.
Thanks for writing.

Started off really funny and was enjoying it but the ending then turned quite angsty which I wasn't expecting. Hope you write some more funny stuff.

Amazing

I luv it! XD

this is a good idea, but at the end of each novel, Harry tends to go through everything with Dumbledore anyway...js

such a good story well done and please cotnine with it