This was gooddddd

That shouldn't have made me feel the way it did. I mean I'm in summer school trying to control my breathing. I'm like so turned on.

So gross. It actually made me gag. Your writing isn't bad or anything. The contents of the story though are shocking. Not happy I walked into it.

mmmmm that was hot write more please

Nice mini story. :)

Harry's potion? hahaha Oh my God! I had to slap a hand over my outh because I was so surprised by that. I hadn't suspected a thing until that point. Awesome surprise though! And Remus' reaction! Ahhh! Poor Severus has no idea what's happening, which somehow makes it so much better. Very entertaining chapter!

I enjoyed your details from the dining hall. It is so sad the toll taken by some. Getting Snape's thoughts on everyone around was a very fun exploration of the characters.

Errrrrm, was this supposed to be funny? Because i'v gotta say, i found it bloody hilarious! Please tell me you actually ment to take the piss?

can i have a lession like that please? HOT!

Wow! I have to tell you: as soon as I read that the "potion" was milky white, I had my suspicions...

But, my God, calling it Harry's potion?

Even though the wording of some things was a bit corny, I liked it anyway...

Thank you for bringing us some much-needed, well written erotica.

that's what I cool a lesson

This was good, aside from the constant use of "Sev". That fan-created nickname needs too die.

great story thanks for sharing with us :D

Angel :D

that was... amazing.

HOT! That's all I can say...