Reviews for Torn
Nicky chapter 36 . 7/14
I cried when L died in that chapter you wrote it beautifully. Seraphine's words when he died just made me sob like a three year old . You're amazing . I am at loss of words. Please update. After all you promised to update . Have a beautiful day
Beth chapter 23 . 7/12
L isn't out of character here and Iike it . It's amazing keep up the good work
Alisa chapter 1 . 7/12
Epic ! First chapter is amazing
Jenny chapter 1 . 7/12
That was fun! Please update
Arushi chapter 1 . 7/6
I want to see the reaction of Matt and Mello when they see seraphine with L
Collette chapter 1 . 7/6
I really enjoyed when they kissed you wrote it so beautifully
Collette chapter 10 . 7/6
Great story and nice chemistry between L and Seraphine please update soon hope you are alright and will find enough time to continue the fan fiction in quarantine
Jeanine chapter 46 . 7/5
Hello writer I hope you are doing well in quarantine and I really hope you continue keep up the good work :)
Julia chapter 23 . 7/4
Hello writer,
I really enjoyed reading your fiction please update soon . You are just flawless the fiction was marvellous. Hope you update soon :)
Penelope chapter 58 . 6/17
Please update I love your fiction it's quarantine now anyways I hope you find time to update soon
Penelope chapter 58 . 6/17
Please update soon
Lara chapter 58 . 6/17
It's been really long . I am still hoping that someday you will update please I begggggg youuuu I really loveeee your story please update
Gracy chapter 34 . 6/7
I love youuuuu. You are incredible I wanna give a hug to youuuu
Guest chapter 58 . 4/18
Hello! I just found this fic again! I remember reading it a couple years ago when I first got into Death Note. I love it and I hope you update soon!
god of all chapter 58 . 9/14/2019
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
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