Reviews for The Crying of the Snake |
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thisisaccountisnolongerinuse chapter 1 . 9/6/2015 Aaawww... Harry and Hermione are lucky to have such a great friend. HARRY! HERMIONE! YOU BETTER BE GRATEFUL FOR RON! OKAY?! |
Chicky chapter 1 . 10/18/2011 Awww this is so dang cute I recon u should do the morning after well though |
remy-areyousrs chapter 1 . 9/8/2011 I loved this. A lot. Seems exactly like what would really have happened. X3 |
The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 8/19/2011 So much love for this story... :) |
Furball101 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011 This story is very good and cute too. Your english is excellent, considering it's not your first language! So well done :) |
DiceRainstrider chapter 1 . 8/14/2011 Such a sweet story. :) |
metaphoricheart chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 You don't see enough stories of Ron comforting Harry. It's usually Ron being a prat. This was well done, just enough comfort but not sappy. Nice job. |
a daughter called random chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 d'! this was really sweet. and very convincing. i always felt sorry for ron & hermione having to soothe harry after his nightmares. And you got Ron's humour pretty spot-on, too. "How dare you fail your Master…" Ron raised an eyebrow at the mention of the last word. "I said I was sorry, your Majesty may go back to sleep and shut it, if He pleases" he answered awesome. One little thing, seeing as you say English isn't your first lagnuage, when writing in English you don't need to put '-' before speech. Just a little thing in case anyone gets picky like myself but it doesn't impact hugely. I'm suprised this doesn't have more reviews, it's really nice x |