It was very good! I do think they were in character but the doctor seemed a little cheesy. Who knows? maybe he's always like that?

i was able to clearly imagine them as they are on the show. well done :) i love amy and eleven OTP indeed

Ok, this is really beautiful. Pitch perfect on the characters, and the relationship was endearingly, believably sweet. Great work, thank you for sharing!
Kat

AWWW

This is so cute! I love it :P

This, on one of my all-too frequent whimsical, wistful Amy/11 haunts (I love Rory, I do, but sometimes the Doctor looks at her and my heart just aches) was exactly what I was hoping to find. You captured them - him - wonderfully.

"Amy Pond," he says, looking softly and slowly. Her name melts into a mix of madimpossiblemagnificent on his tongue and he shivers.

And when he finds Amy—real, alive Amy—she is in his arms and he presses kisses everywhere he can find—but not her lips, not her lips—her hair, her forehead, dropping one in her palm.

Her fingers curl, as if his kiss is a tangible object, as if she will keep it to press between the pages of a book.

He breathes her name again and again until the jumbled syllables become what he really means to say: you're alive, you're alive, you're alive—

(These lines in particular. I just can't even. Amazing.)

An incredible first foray. I do hope you write more for them. :)

Annie

aaawwwwww! the almost amy part confused me, but i got a grand total of 4 hours of sleep last night, so thats prolly why...