Good God, that was hot! Why does this not have more reviews? The tone of this entire fic is amazing! I have no idea what else to say, my brain is a pile of goo right now, lol!

Holy Fuck that was the hottest thing I've read in a long time. Good job! Zomg

this was wonderful, very well written. (: definitely one of my favorite arthur/ariadne stories!

You should seriously write a sequel to this! Not just about them having sex, but exploring their relationship, and how the rest of the team reacts to them :)

ohmygosh, hottest story i've read, BY FAR :D

:D I love this story!

best fanfiction i have ever, EVER read! truly amazing!

Holy shit that is hot...just wow.

I. Love. It. No explanation needed.

O.O Omg, the summary for this story doesn't do it justice! It has been ages since i've read a fanfiction that seemed to capture the persona of the characters so well! I did think Adriana was a bit timid in the beggining but just justified it so well that it simply deepend her character! The level of emotion you reached was also lovely. The whole thing was very realistic, romantic and EXTREMELY hot! I hope to read more liek this in the future. Very well done.

For some reason I can't log in to give you this review but I wanted you to know I really liked your story. In gact I could even see it progressing into something more. Great job!

BlackBetty

OMG I remember reading this story! I loved it!