Like it but sadly this is yet another discontinued masterpiece.

Hillarious and heart warming.

and then the story died

Update please!

Please update man!

Love your work keep on going.

Epically done!

i read the original fox among hounds it was amazing thank you for creating a better version cant wait to see where this goes.

*snort* Yeah, I've never been able to figure out why Asuma is such a rare Sensei for Naruto in fanfiction. You'd think he'd be more popular, if for no other reason than the fact that he's wind-natured just like Naruto.

Your chapters are way too short...no offence. I hope you publish another chapter soon i was just starting to really like your story.

What's EQ?

First i was upset at the teams then you had obtio and a was like cool a uchia who didnt die. Then you killed kakashi which raises questions. Like who killed rin now are the uchia been murdered yet. I like asuma its just im going miss choji-ino-shika team. I will stay with it for now but questions have been raised and now i will be awaiting well thought out answers

dude I like this story why did you stop can please start again

ok so i waited until i read the 5 new chapters of the revised story and i gotta say it's a big improvement so far on the original though i loved the original to can't wait to read more and maybe this we could keep a certain dog alive and i love how you subbed kakashi for obito should make things interesting

I can't wait to finish reading the revised version of aFatH!