Loved it!

This was so sweet, adorable, and HOT!
I loved it, absolutely loved it.

Exciting in all of the discovery, in the newness...in a rhythm old as time.

OMG I died and went to sexy sweet smut heaven.

He's like a scared little bunny. Its adorable. Thanks for sharing.

You have to continue this story, it's so hot and could go in so many directions. I want Edward to meet Jasper, I want Carlisle to come all the way out of the closet, I want him to be a grandpa! More, please write more.

Wow, God that was hot. I love slash stories, they're my guilty pleasure although I try not to feel too guilty about it, lol. I loved this story, you don't find too many with Carlisle in them. I loved how considerate & tender Jasper was and how he coaxed Carlisle further out of the closet. It's such a shame that Carlisle had to wait so long to start the life he should have had from being a lot younger but at least he found the courage to come out and finding Jasper could be the making of him.

Jane x

that was so freaking awesome! Hot and well written! I could totally be down with more of this story after the contest is over :)

This was so so so sweet!

I normally don't like any stories with Carlisle with anyone besides Esmeralda but this was so good!

I sincerely hope you continue this story once the contest is over!

There are so many places it can go!

Loved it!

wow loved this.

Wow. Hot! I have a little trouble imagining Carlisle as shy and quiet like that though.

so so so good! Please write more when you win this contest!

Really good

It's so strange to see Carlisle in this situation. Not being gay but being the inexperienced one who needs someone to teach him this stuff. I think Jasper was very sweet and gentle with him though.