Reviews for Khawagah
MegaAnimeFreak7 chapter 9 . 5/9/2017
What an absolutely fantastic end! So glad Sasuke got his happy ending. He honestly deserved it. And Officer Naruto? That fits so well. So glad I found this fic. Steady on!
the Moon our Witness chapter 8 . 11/1/2016
Wow that was dark... I kinda love how you made Pein into a weak person who is utterly startled by his lack of immunity against worldly things. Because the mindset fits so well with someone who believes to be a god.
Though I wonder why Naruto and Sasuke didn't just try to get to the american or Japanese ambassy in Libya, where you usually go when you get robbed / loose your papers. Especially as Sasuke is a politician.

After hearing you suffer from clinical depression, I just wanted to tell you to never give up on life and I promise you, that even if you are not happy yet, you will be if you just try to forge your own path in life.
Keep up the good work!(:
MegaAnimeFreak7 chapter 8 . 8/1/2016
My gosh what an exciting chapter. Again you've managed to keep me on the edge of my seat. I really love that turn of events (or that deux ex machina) you threw in there just for Pein (what a fitting way to go for such an ass). I never expected it. And I can't wait for them to reach civilization. Granted, I don't think that Naruto knows that Sasuke said yes, or maybe he heard it in passing and we viewers don't know it yet. Nevertheless this was a great chapter and I can't wait for more! :)
MegaAnimeFreak7 chapter 7 . 11/5/2015
Why are there no reviews for this chapter? This was phenomenal! It kept me on the edge of my seat, their reactions were very accurate and Naruto's proposal at the end warmed my heart! Such a cliffhanger, but at least I got to hear Sasuke say yes! XD
Can't wait for the next chapter
Hitomi uchiha24 chapter 6 . 3/7/2015
Great chapter I loved this story can't wait for you to update.
Dbzwar chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
Where's the rest of the story QQ
Guest chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
oh gosh! You left me hanging! I hope you'll continue this! :)
Lady Spain chapter 6 . 1/28/2013
What the hell. Just surprising! So Akatsuki an enemy huh?
Can't wait for the update XDDD
HavenCraze chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Dub dun dun! Wow what a violent turn if events
HavenCraze chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Damn that was fast for news coverage lol
syrraki chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
As if I didn't review this or Gaikokujin! I love both of the stories and I thought they were an incredibly rare find! Gaikokujin in particular was really inspiring for me, and so I just reread it now that I'm looking for some more inspiration, haha.

There were a few tense problems in Gaikokujin, but I didn't notice them in this one, really, so nice job!

It's interesting how in this story, Naruto is the one wondering about Sasuke, and in the other story, it was all Sasuke's pov and finding stuff out about Naruto. Anyway, I'll keep reading! Good luck with your writing.
Ttrace chapter 6 . 12/15/2012
Okay - I read all the chapter s and I have to say this is some good reading. You are very detailed with your writing. And I must say - I am very afraid for Naru and Sus right now...
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2012
Naruto is being an ass.
Not Your Cup of Tea chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
Just wanted to say that I love your story. :)

Can't wait for the next update!
LyRiCho chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
Wow so I am just realizing that every situation that somehow harms them is all in a result about Naruto's past.. Hmm yes... But I find it cute that Sasuke is willing to go through it all.. Hehe they have some deep love there!... So please continue! I've become quite addicted to your fics now! XD
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