Reviews for Severus and Lily |
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Anisabel chapter 5 . 7/9 I love your story please continue more |
Hello chapter 5 . 12/26/2019 And the other day that we had a lot to think needed but it would make it better |
andjelija.nenic chapter 3 . 3/1/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
unnamed visitor chapter 5 . 8/15/2012 Sorry I didn't review sooner I last track of this story for a while, You did a great job with this chapter and loved the Severus/Lily romance as well. I love stories that involve Severus being able to save Lily, getting a second chance with her and Severus/Lily/Harry becoming a family. I hope you will update this again someday very soon. |
Me chapter 4 . 6/6/2012 That was good, but sort of cliche |
Luiz4200 chapter 5 . 3/9/2012 Couldn't Lily tell people Pettigrew was the real Secret-Keeper so Sirius would no longer be on the run? |
unnamed visitor chapter 4 . 2/26/2012 I never liked James Potter, always thought he was a first class smart ass. Even though he eventually grew-up I always thought that it was his attitude as a student at Hogwarts and his poor choice in friends is what costed Lily her life. More then once I have said that there are a lot of Harry Potter Couples that I am a big fan of and Severus/Lily happens to be one of them. I always like stories involves Lily surviving the killing curse and Severus being the one to pick up the pieces and be there for Lily/Harry. I hope you will consider updating this again at some point soon. |
Lunar chapter 4 . 10/8/2011 I love this please wright more! |
Lunar chapter 4 . 10/8/2011 I love this please wright more! |
MasterSerina83 chapter 4 . 8/20/2011 Interesting, I find myself curious as to where this story will go. |
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 2 . 8/15/2011 wicked i look forward to more |
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011 nice one |
Morcelu chapter 2 . 8/15/2011 Looks to be to a good start. |