Mengsk being at peace seems the peace of total denial rather than the peace of assurred victory.

I daresay... you don't know sc2 very well do you? Umojan Protectorate was seemingly lead by valerian, who helped kerrigan control,zerg,powers, and general rehabilitation, I've only rea till chapter five... . You might wanna look up info on Raynor's Raiders... displaying them like that w zerg expt,on chapter 1..

"The Overmind was never omniscient, even if his power allowed him to appear that way. He could not have predicted the artifact, or that the Terrans would ever be able to use it on you.
Since the visions of the future are from the Overmind, and go along a future where Jim used the artifact, and allowed Tychus to kill her (or killed her himself), the Overmind did know of the Aritfact, and that the Terrans would successfully use it.

Blizzard should be hiring you instead of the team they've got writing for Starcraft.

A good reference for writing a somehow similar FanFiction after your work.

After so long time, I read this FanFiction again, and suddenly find it is better than I First time read it.

Great story so far the only problem i have with was how human the infected were i could see experimented ones have such thing but do to genetic mutations down to the Genome level Zerg would have removed these things seeing them as Flawed .Logic ,Reason ,and Swarm Survival would .Fear used safety to alert of danger to appoint ,rage can use to ignore damage that would cause one to pass out ,Curiosity used to discover new food ,tools and thing to improve the Swarm,Creativity much the Like Zerg Splicer would constantly seek to develop new strains ,mutations ,and adaption Would not stick Make one of something ,Would constantly seek to improve his own skills ,make more like to farther help the hive ,or even develop Lesser version of Queen of Blades ,As Zerg I would Fascinated by Insects do the they similarity .Plus wipe out entire species to integrate them into swarm almost seems wasteful were Farming them or cultivate plants and animal for Biomass ,genetic material ,Leave Some alive so that may Latter on in live farther evolve provide new genetic mutations and diversity for the Swarm .Hell Future conflict would also like force Zerg to Adapt and evolve Farther much Diversity and Tactics.

I Have Handful of Idea for Oc's and at least 2 story Idea But do to My bad education and the fact have hard time fill the space between moment have thought of I like need a Partner or Someone to share my idea with chat idea to help craft the story As the co writer.

I Smell big pig or Is that smell of Destroyed Ego of Emperor.

Evil takes the form those that are extreme selfishness ,egotistic ,master of self Denial and twist rationality to justify any thing they do and say never excepting that they at fault .Look no farther then about 98 lawyers ,judges ,and government and politics Leaders .

Is lion evil for eating the zibra if so then humanity evil for the genicide ,enslavement other species and other groups of humans.

In Karrigans place I would taken only some then breed more genetic and bio-mass .let the rest continue living .Having a planet with fast growing wild life I would cultivate the animals and leave some wild life free as well .so animals not going extinct and my swarm as fast maturing source of Bio-mass to farm .

So Morrigan has forgotten his conversation with Mengsk about Hybrids back when he first visited Dead Man's Rock. And Mengsk has also forgotten that conversation?

Also he's reacting to hybrids in almost the opposite way?

I like this story but wow is that a continuity error.

This Story is very good. I love it. I like how you portrayed the Zerg (at least the leader class) as sentient beings but with a rather different way of thinking than humans, which makes them believable and gives them an 'alien-feeling' at the same time (I liked how you managed to portray the clash between the different cultures and make it so realistic). I also like how you fleshed out the infested Terrans and showed Sarah's struggle with herself...
And at the same time you still managed to include a fair share of funny moments (I loved the whole Nydus worm charity thing :)... I laughed so hard).
I'm looking forward to read the next part, because this is one of the best Starcraft stories I've read so far.

Things going wrong at the worst possible time is Smith's Law not Murphy's. Murphy's Law is that if something can go wrong it will, but it could be at any conceivable time even the best time (meaning it won't truly hurt anything or might even help depending on circumstances).

On the issue of "I've noticed that the number of views and reviews for my StarCraft story have dropped considerably. Do you want me to continue 'To Whatever End?" I have to point out you haven't updated it in over 3 and a half years. Statistically speaking, it has about the same number of reviews as your most reviewed story "Her Body's Plaything" (comparing word counts and review counts), thus I believe that is evidence your fic was well liked. Many people will not start a dead fic, so blaming us for your choices seems...infantile at best.

Wow that was definitely different and yes still as amazing, compelling and interesting as Hots Amazing job.