I think affect is cause and effect is result, but I'm not sure. Great work here, hope you continue it!

PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!

Affect is really more of a medical term. If someone has a flat affect it means that they don't change expression. Effect is with two things interacting; A effects B

Great story so far. Will you be coming back to it anytime soon or have you stopped writing? I hope it will be continued soon.

Let me rape you. Where do you live?

I really like this. Great job!

I'm positive you lost a lot of readers after just the summary, as soon as you mentioned gay stuff.

I read somewhere that 'Affect' is 'The Action' and 'Effect' is the 'End Result'.

Omg, I'm dying! This is too funny! When are you going to continue this?!

I love your fic! I hope it's not abandoned ;)

I couldn't stop laughing

interesting. as in affect or effect, I think 'Affect' more to influence and 'Effect' more to result(?)

Honestly Gin sounds like a kicked puppy I feel like I need to hug him to make him happy
I love all the 'shippings' you made
Affect is a verb you (are affecting something) Effect is a noun (this is the effect of something)
Not sure if you'll read this or if you even need the advice anymore but here you go
Keep on the writes

it is a shame you have stop updating this fanfic as I really like It...a real shame.

Great Story! PLS PLS PLS Continue!