Reviews for Two Lonely Children |
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jerniman chapter 9 . 8/5/2019 Great story, hope to see an update - really interested in who will be assigned as their teammate. |
jerniman chapter 7 . 8/3/2019 I am really enjoying the story so far. Very well written, and the flow moves the plot along pretty well. I will say that some of the dialog with Jiraiya, and the Hokage gets a bit redundant between chapters. Also, the characters feel a bit older then where they should be, but it works with the situation they find themselves. |
jerniman chapter 2 . 8/1/2019 Interesting story line, well written and flowed evenly throughout. |
LB Cat chapter 9 . 5/7/2019 Thanks. This is a good story. Love it when a good Gaara is involve. I hope you continue and update when you have time. |
Ben Walker1 chapter 9 . 11/10/2018 I'm assuming gaara returned to the sand? should start your next chapter with a small sections describing his return, also maybe mention Jiraya fixing his terrible seal |
creativesm75 chapter 9 . 6/19/2018 fabulous |
TheWateringWizard chapter 9 . 5/6/2018 I was surprise that they graduated with Lee’s class. Why did you do that ? Because now I wonder who will be their third teammate ! Also, where on earth is Gaara ?! |
Orchestra Of Order chapter 9 . 4/19/2018 Awesome. |
Orchestra Of Order chapter 8 . 4/19/2018 Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy. Progress. |
Fenrir ragnarok chapter 9 . 4/13/2018 Neji seems to have been trained in root, seriously I know that the hyuga are always poker face and all, but here he seems to have been brainwashed |
R-king 93 chapter 9 . 4/13/2018 Excellent chapter, keep up the good work. |
Lowbacca's Roar chapter 9 . 4/12/2018 Legit wondering what state the house will be in. Good stuff, man! Keep up the good work! |
Leaf Ranger chapter 9 . 4/11/2018 Well, while I'm a bit miffed Neji has such a quick turn around, this was overall a nice chapter. Keep up the awesome work! |
Naruhinalover20 chapter 9 . 4/11/2018 Well glad naruto and hinata showed neji dont mess with them |
Dragon Man 180 chapter 9 . 4/11/2018 Nice chapter, though I'm a bit surprised Gaara didn't come with them. I can't wait to see how the teams get assigned, but I can totally see Naruto threatening the Hokage with endless pranks if he's not on a team with Hinata. |