keep on writng

This story is epic beyond words.

like

make sure your quote marks are in the right places

Interesting chapter
curious what Marque and the others will do

and the changes in Sarah are only because of the Kyubi or because she now has chackra

wonder what will happen now
and good chapter

A bit of advice? You need to work on how you lay out your stories a bit. It's difficult to read in places because of either too much, or too little punctuation. Good job at not walltexting though. Keep up the good work.

Well I wonder where this will go.

I like your story and concept, however in order to get a better response you should check your writing, since it needs a lot of work, not only in spelling (those errors can be easily forgiven) but in punctuation, specially since I've seen that you don't use commas at all, making your story pretty hard to read and deter various potencial readers. I hope you get a pre reader to help you correct the story and good luck.

I really like the fic its one of the better naruto/x-men crossovers i read lately and can't wait for the update

I wonder if Naruto and his Blood Clone will swap knowledge with each others, now and then.

Awsome story I really like how u stated the idea early then started with the story

cool can't wait tell the next chap. :)

like it

Good chapter Im looking forward to the next one also I think you should have Naruto paired with Laura K./X-23