Reviews for Little Chocolate Demon Girl
Lu-chan 16Love chapter 5 . 12/3/2019
Hahaha! Poor Wakana-chan! She's so confused right now. Can't wait for the next chapter and see the cute moments between Rihan and Wakana.
SakuraKuroTenshi chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
Please update when you are able to
yuranura476 chapter 5 . 6/3/2017
wow this is amazing chapter . :)
yuranura476 chapter 4 . 6/3/2017
BAD RIHAN BAD RIHAN DON'T STEAL LITTLE WAKANA'S FIRST KISS and Hmm Author -San hmm there are Spelling Mistakes and grammar needs to be check and please keep updating this amazing story :)
yuranura476 chapter 3 . 6/3/2017
hahaha Rihan really is a Pervert and we love him and Wakana -Chan please update soon :)
yuranura476 chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
awww Little Wakana so adorable and I hope that Nura clan will look after her please update. :)
yuranura476 chapter 1 . 6/3/2017
Thank you for Making this Amazing Rihan and Wakana Story and I hope that little Wakana going to be Alright and there's only one Spelling Mistake in this chapter Iam not sure about other chapters but please update . :)
Yuzuki476 chapter 5 . 11/24/2016
Please update this amazing story soon.
Yuzuki476 chapter 4 . 11/24/2016
Naughty Rihan get your mind out of the gutter Wakana is just a young girl and please update.
Yuzuki476 chapter 3 . 11/24/2016
Amazing story this is please keep updating this story.
Yuzuki476 chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
Poor Wakana she lost her family and am glad that Rihan saved her and please update this story.
Yuzuki476 chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
I wonder what type of Yokai Wakana is? And please keep updating this story and I hope that there will be more Wakana and Rihan stories like this one.
A.S.-sama chapter 5 . 12/30/2015
Nice! ;]

Please, update soon!
divinecriticizer chapter 5 . 4/19/2014
Goodness me!

I am squealing right now... and I'm not thinking straight so I can't really put up a good criticism.
There's a misspelled word in chapter four.

Don't lose interest in writing, This is one of the best WakanxRihan Fic you ever made. It's not too much fluff, the progress of the plot is really good... its not forced to be so fast... (to compare it with the PE Equals Love fic you made)

Forced because this story is... the one holding back is Rihan, which makes it even more interesting. The dominant character holding himself back? The usual is that, the submissive tame their hormones to behave, and the dominant do whatever they please to the other party... but this...

the plot is really interesting. Different from any WxR plot I've ever read. Because most of them were Wakana is in High school and it will all revolve in the beauty of being a high school student and... I think you get the point.

You've kept well the most important details on each characters.

Wakana may be a yokai here but her refershing cuteness is still intact. (Being a cute little kid she is.) Even her obliviousness is present. Ahahaha, though much more innocent.

Rihan's character wasn't sabotage; (apart from being a lolicon) his cool demeanor is still there, him being gallant is still there.

just lessen the blushing part. It makes him... not like him at all. He's not like Rikuo to blush and make up faces. (As far as I know. Feel free to correct me. I would be so glad to be corrected I I will know and have references in the future) He's just... cool. But definitely he would be losing all his composure once his lady love is involved... like any man should.

And the uncertain love (maybe) or should I say overly attachment to her... and him holding back, while keeping the most important details in his character was still there. Thank you. I know that if Rihan would review to your story, he wouldn't be ashamed to read it over and over.

I won't say anything about the technical problems, (though I already did.) because you see, I'm too absorbed by the sweetness of your fic. So if you were to update, I'll review something on technical stuff and of yup, on the course of the story!

Hope you write again! It's already 2014!
SoraYuuki6897 chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
Please update this chapter! Aww Wakana is sooo cute with Rihan!
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