Thank you for writing and sharing! I so enjoyed this story.

YES I kind of loved this chapter because I love Charlie/Hermione! Obviously I’m rooting for Cedric in this fic, but it was fun to see so much of Charlie

As painful as it is to have to say goodbye to this story especially when the past two chapters have been two of my absolute favorites, I have always and will always say if writing no longer brings you joy you shouldn't do it.

thank you for sharing the end you had planned and this fantastic story as it is. it was a wonderful journey and I'm sad to say goodbye, but grateful for what there was.

Thank you for giving us closure on this story. I'm sad not to see it fleshed out, not understand. It's hard to imagine Lucy's end, but in sure you would have done it justice. But still, why would she have to die at all? She's a magnificent OC. Which is why I think k you've left fan fic to write paid fiction.

Don't do it, Cedric! Stall until the Order gets there! And why did you call the Order and not the Ministry?

I loved the description of the wixen ballet!

I love how Cedric's opinion of Mr. Weasley is shifted from indulgence to admiration with just a cup of tea.

You do a good job of capturing the complexity of people...everyone seems multifaceted in your hands.

I love how you pit Hermione and Cedric against each other and how they learn to see their own blind spots as a result. And that it helps them grow stronger... as individuals and in their love.

I love how you're addressing the muggle versus magic worlds.

I’m disappointed by the cut off ending, but appreciate you explaining what you would have wrote. I throughly enjoyed both parts to this story, I literally binged them as much as I possibly could.

nice ending. I appreciate the explanation

I love this story, but Cedric 's hypocrisy annoys me. the author paints him as a cultural protector, anti bigot. he cant even support spew because only house elves should speak for house elves, BUT he heads a muggle ministry division, as an almost pureblood who doesn't know how to tune a radio! there are plenty of muggleborn wie needing jobs in this universe... so hypocritical

nice Arthur characterization

Hey, I wanted to thank you for posting your planned ending. I enjoyed reading your work.