Please update soon

It was so good I wish there was more

AWESOME! do continue

Oh and this one was a real feast X9 So much longer and OMG Kaname-sama has also made his appearance! ! ! ! *_* I was delighted to see him (and Takuma too, of course) and especially loved reading about and from his side of things *nods* Also, this little twist you added with Takuma and the Ichijous being close to Shizuka and the Hious is brilliant, I loved it. Not to mention such a kind Asato - an unusual sight, indeed, but not unappealing at all - on the contrary, I liked seeing him that way for a change.

But OMG Zero-chan lost his memories! ! ! TToTT Poor little thing, now he is also lost and confused there! *hugs Zerorin to her bosom* And yet, being the shameless bastard I am, I still like this idea too XD Even though I do feel bad for our little Zero-chan, but then again, he lives with Kaname-sama now, so I can't really complain about a thing *shrugs*

Wonder why Zero-chan won't talk though. . .*slaps herself* Ah, that's right, I'm just being stupid, of course it's because of his trauma. It's interesting btw. I kind of enjoyed 'watching' how Kaname-sama coped with the events and how Zerorin was, how he behaved and all. . .

And the last part was especially pleasing for me. It was both moving and sweet yet so painful to witness *sighs* I liked it how Zero-chan showed his vulnerability and how he boldly came to Kaname-sama and even went as far as to get into his bed! *squeals delightedly* Now putting my perverted thoughts aside, truly, it was delightful to see. And I'm glad that Kaname-sama allowed it too! It was nice seeing him sympathizing with Zero-chan and finally realizing that he was harmless, especially to him, a pureblood who is God knows how much stronger than a mere human child (regardless of the fact that he is a hunter and all; not to mention his state)

Awwwww but it was so, so, so cute when Zero-chan did that and took Kaname-sama's hand! ! ! ! *_* I'm guessing he unconsciously did it because of Ichirun? As they did sleep together very often and Zerorin should be used to sharing his bed with someone.

I'm guessing Shizuka took Ichiru-chan? Or not? Either way, truly hope he is and will be alright. He has to! ! ! TTOTT

Am CRAVING FOR MORE! ! ! You got me totally hooked and I can't wait to find out what will happen next! X9 Please update SUPER ASAP! ! ! :D

I LOVE and ADORE this story! ! ! It piqued my curiosity and nearly took my breath away right from this very first chapter. I truly enjoyed reading, I like your style and the idea of Zero-chan and Shizuka being friends (or at least somewhere on this level in their relationship). But even more than that, I was absolutely delighted by your A/N - I love it that it will stray off from the original plot and I'll be immensely happy to absorb new facts and scenes that you're planning to give us, your readers. Am so looking forward to it already, you have no idea, dearest X9

Okay, now on to the matter at hand. This chapter was amazing. I liked the start and the thing with the paper cranes - I applaud you for bringing it here. It's a wonderful element, not to mention how sweet t was to see Zero-chan doing it for his beloved twin's sake. I just always adore their strong brotherly love and bonds - it's so sweet and heartwarming. . .*sighs dreamily* Felt truly sorry for Ichiru-chan btw, from what was told from Zero-chan's POV about their parents and Ichirun crying and all. . .just imagining it broke my heart *sobs miserably*

Shizuka and Zero-chan moments in the beginning were beautiful and so wonderful btw. . .And to me, that was exactly what made what happened later all the more scary and heartbreaking. I'm telling you, I literally trembled in fear and apprehension. You described everything so well, it was thrilling to read, especially when our dear boys were upstairs in the room and Shizuka was coming closer with each second.

Also, I absolutely loved it how Zerorin tried to protect Ichiru-chan - made my heart melt here. The scene was just too sweet and so, so touching! DX And I feel genuinely sorry for Zero-chan, so betrayed and heartbroken. . .not to mention bitten. But dammit, I still LOVE such turn of events!

You did great. The start is awesome and I can't wait to get MOAR! :D

This fic is very promising! I can't wait for more of it, it's very interesting so far!

Awww... poor Zero he was probaly thinking of Ichiru( in a subconscious sort of way). Good job:]

Poor Zero-Chan... The Ichijous are kind. I'm glad Kaname accepted Zero. The bed scene is really cute. I hope the both of them can grow to be friends. I like how you describe things. Nicely done.

very mysterious , good chapter , please update soon.

aww so cute. i can tell Kaname likes Zero. Takuma is a sweetheart.

this is very good, Is asato a good guy? Did Ichiru die too?

fantastic, can't wait for the next chapter.

I can't wait for the next chapter I hope you update soon

That was simply amazing and beautifully written. Great job:]

Awesome start. I like how you portrayed Zero's friendship with Shizuka. Unfortunately Shizuka betrayed him, or not according to her she wanted Zero. I look forward to see how Zero's life will be after this.