hmm. I'm really pissed off that there has been no update to this story. I was hoping just for one more chapter if you were gonna abandon it where Martin is killed, but all we got is Martin threatening to rape and kill Artemis and escaping, and everyone planning what to do

really love the concept, hope you're going to update it

zackary the first male hunter and apollo likes him that is good thing for a male to get the blessing of both twins wooow will he get a double blessing from them that will be cooool.

Zackary is definitively not a leader or anything. He should not have been given the quest. That, and what's the point of having Percy and Clarisse along if he's just going to go running to his mortal friends in 'The Temple of Fortune'?
What type of leader lets himself be overwhelmingly blinded by fanatical loyalty, as well as purposely throw an ally into the face of danger, when knowing the concequences of such action. It's his own fault for the failure and slow down in the caves, not Percy's. He should suffer, not Percy who might die from being in the sky.
Also, he bullies WOLF... and what type of name is WOLF? Zackary is an arrogant person, making fun of Percy's unawarness of everything.
Zackary wasn't there for the Battle of Manhattan, or know of Percy's constant struggles to stay alive each year... really, Zackary should understand that not all people have the gods adopt and raise them.
Also, runes are for Shadowhunters, witches, and the Egyptians in Rick Riordan's 'Kane Chronicles'. The Romans spoke Latin, not Italian. Italian came afterwards- it's a Latin language, butn ot Latin itself.
I'm surprised that they aren't attacked more often... Also Zackery should not even know about the Romans, due to his serving Artemis, a GREEK goddess.

Hey, look. Just cuz Zackary was raised to believe men were the scum of the earth, do doesn't need to activtly show it. Especially when he's a man. Zackary is, again, very arrogant. Just cuz you point out place XYZ is xd miles away doesn't neccessarily mean that you're headed there. For all you know, you could be heading in the opposite direction, to place ZYX. Also, Zackary shouldn't assume Percy knew what he ment. Percy can't read Zackary's mind. 'When you assume, Zakcery, you make an a** out of u and me'

Wow, Zackary is quite arrogant. Also, Thalia didn't rise through the ranks, she was automatically lietenant. Circe was never a Hunter, please stick to both the PJ Universe and to the actual myths which the PJ Universe is based on.

Actually Otion was the first to accompany Artemis on the hunt

love it please continue

Die already! Gosh!

Kill him, Zack!

Its good! I like it alot!

it me my logins messed up though not american and my geographys not great but i think that they should come out of the rocky mountains a few miles from vegas or somewere but they were being followed by the people who ko'ed them before they have a bit of a fight but wolf nd the pegasus come to save the day gettin them out of there

liking the story

see ya

Update It just got to the good part. (I hate but love cliffhangers all at the same time) :)

so know ones even tried to get rid of the f****** idiot for kidnapping children? WOW that is so f***** up!

oh great. just great. this news is making me really sad. im really starting to hate the government! why would they do that in the first place? what harm has this website ever done to them?