Reviews for Strange Apprentice |
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George1892 chapter 9 . 6/25 I take back what I said about the diadem. Interesting ending. |
George1892 chapter 8 . 6/25 Good chapter but again the diadem was missing. |
George1892 chapter 2 . 6/25 Out of curiosity, was the diadem left out of the horcrux vacuum on purpose? |
agnar chapter 8 . 6/23 this fic turned into utter shit in the last 2 chapters. The first 2 strikes by Harry were good, well planned, well thought out, hard-hitting. After that, from the Ministry attack forward, you apparently decided Harry was too smart and strong, so you reverted him into a fucking weak-ass idiot, whose super magical invisibility cloak doesn't fucking block ANYONE's sight as Bella saw through it, Voldemort saw through it, Harry might as well have been wearing a plain old regular cloak for all the fucking good it apparently is. Why even fucking BOTHER to write the first 6 chapters if you're just going to have the Trio all end up weak-ass chumps against a nutjob with a tiny sliver of soul left and his semi-competent, inbred minions? The whole fucking point was to show how incompetent DD and his Order were, but then you had the Trio struggle and stumble about like morons and firsties. |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/22 Great story the only parts I didn’t like Was when you killed off characters that survived in Canon like Ginny molly Arthur Neville and the grangers But that’s just my dream preference so it’s still a great story |
Matt chapter 7 . 11/18/2019 It's Perenelle Flamel, not Pernell. You could at least look it up if you're not sure how to spell it. |
BaddieDZ2 chapter 9 . 11/4/2019 Yeah, it was the end. Too stupid to continue either way. |
BaddieDZ2 chapter 3 . 11/4/2019 Get a beta. It's obvious you're too stupid to be allowed to write without one. |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 9 . 10/10/2019 A great story here. |
clover cat Klee chapter 9 . 8/10/2018 whoa, I mean, that ending... of course there would be always more enemies growing ever stronger, that seeems to be how the superhero world works, but to incorporate voldemort again in a sneak peak was evil! Other than that I really enjoyed that, alsways do love me some Harry Potter Goes His Own Way;) |
AkaDeca chapter 9 . 8/3/2018 Beautiful ending! Looking to see if you have a sequel. |
AkaDeca chapter 8 . 8/3/2018 Sad about all the loss. Where did Sirius get that idea of the Avengers from? The one in bold? Can you tell me please? |
AkaDeca chapter 7 . 8/3/2018 Loved this chapter! Really happy about Thor! |
AkaDeca chapter 6 . 8/3/2018 Love how Harry’s using his epic powers! And I love Ron’s humor. |
AkaDeca chapter 5 . 8/3/2018 I love this, but I don’t like how Hermione has powers too. But this is great! |