Excellent story! I loved it!

This was excellent! Puh- leeeeze continue?

Aw sooo sweet! I loved it!

Yes you can be persuaded! *sends very powerful, as well as obnoxiously loud, vibes of persuasion toward our dear author*

And just a note ... lemons can always be implied - no need to be super descriptive.

That cake sounded absolutely delicious, though I think Albus was far more ... yum!

My second attempt to review, first time it wouldn't let me. That was adorable, at first I was so sorry for Minerva, and thought them to be just friends, then to my delight they were married, and Albus was so sweet to her. The bunch of wild flowers was particularly lovely.

This wass great! you have their relationship down perfectly!

Aww, the way you portray them as a couple reminds me of my BF. I have a hot temper, he is calm, we love eachother more than we could ever imagine, I'm focused on the future, he is more laid back. You did a great job:)

CPMG

Very happy that Albus make up the lost birthday after all and they found a place to them. Albus really was a little child like for example with the she could let her hair down of his birthday.

Cute. ( ; I'm glad you continued with this; Albus is such a thoughtful husband.

Great job!

Le sigh... so beautiful. I loved the imagery. It seemed very like them that although Albus was the one that kept being drawn away from their celebrations, Minerva was the one so caught up in it, she couldn't see the beauty around her.

Loved it. THanks for sharing and writing the third chapter! They are good for the soul!

I am smiling and happy and I want my own Albus right now. Lovely work.

That was so incredibly sweet. I did feel sorry for Albus when Minerva snapped at him, though I think we've all been in that sort of situation before. He managed to diffuse it quite quickly, luckily for us. haha. I hope they were successful in thinking up another celebration excuse. lol

Wonderful! And sexy too! :)

You should continue this! I need to see the picnic! ( :

Good job, the cake sounds divine!

I love little Olivia. She is just too cute. :) And that cake made me hungry! :) Thanks for sharing!