I absolutely love this story. It was so well written and I was completely into it.

Lovely story buuut what about the engagement?

these two need a proper ending...I know you don't want to write an epilogue, but one more chapter would suffice... please?

Great story!

I liked how we got to 'hear' both sides of Froelle's phone conversation, that was a cool touch.

I'm glad the bust went well, and I look forward to the reunion.

Glad Sam is awake and well!

I really liked the part about Chris explaining his reasons for asking if he was okay and Sam suddenly no longer being annoyed with him after. It was really well written.

Looking forward to Sam's POV and finding out what made the monitors go crazy. It's an interesting storyline you've come up with.

Ok, I got the Jessica thing now :P

Wonder what happened while Andy was away

I didn't quite understand the part of Jessica suddenly being in danger..

Liked the comment about Sam having taught her to look like she's trying while intentionally messing up, that is actually a really difficult thing to do

I feel like you easily could have posted the parts of the days as one, but the way you have chosen to divide them up is interesting.

What a lucky break for Andy that what she stole actually helped open the case.

It was nice to read about Froelle for a change, and this chapter did have indirect McSwarek, and even though that might not be as good as true McSwarek, it's still a good thing.

Hope Sam recovers soon!

I like how she still manages to keep her head cool under the emotionally difficult circumstances. It shows that she has grown as a cop and as a person and has learned a whole lot in the time from the last ep to this story.

The whole my brother wants to be your boyfriend conversation made me think back to junior high XD

Yay! Go Noelle! White-shirt!

Liking it thus far.

I look forward to learning more about the case and she how Andy deals with undercover assignment, and also to see how she deals when she finds out that it's Sam who has been shot.

Interesting set-up with both of them being on separate undercover assignments.

I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to Sam, and I can't help but wonder if Boyd might be to blame for it happening.

Funny thought - every time I read Jessica Parker I think about sex in the city XD

Hi! I did like the way you ended it too. Even if I wouldn't mind reading an epilogue ... LOL Thanks for sharing with us - Emma