I wish this had happened

That's what wanted to happen at the cemetery. Sherlock was there watching and listening to John's plea for one more miracle...for Sherlock not to be dead...and Sherlock just stood there. If only John had noticed him just like in this story. :,)

This one needs a Kleenex alert. Well done.

that was amazing

wahhhhhhhhhh

That was sad. :(

So sad, but so beautiful too :) Thank you :) xxx

This is the way it should've happened! Gorgeous, thank you.

I really liked the imagery in this story especially in the final part. Very tragic and somehow I feel like it'd be worse if John had known. Definately a good story.

Please tell me you're not going to write any fics based on set reports this year. I so enjoy your writing - it would be a shame to have to go without it for the summer :(

I have read this before, and it is just painfully beautiful. You did an amazing job with this. So well written, and you captured the emotions of both, without being over the top.
Heart-rending.

So angsty... made me tear up.

Well. I have been emotionally scarred. Thank you so much. ;)

Heartbreakingly beautiful. A much more satisfying ending.

Ohhhh. Sniff. And here I thought Jon knowing would make it easier. What a fool am I.

Nicely done. Very.

Very true-to-character, well-written in the extreme. Lovely, lovely work.
Cheers.