Reviews for He's coming back |
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atsuko chapter 1 . 4/6/2013 This was really cute! it took me a bit to piece together what was going on: Rui read her own future ;v; |
Raine454 chapter 1 . 5/25/2012 Hello, Ummm, i have a quick question for you...well actally, two. 1: I have the game Lux-Pain, but i don't remmeeber anything about anyone forgeting Atsuki. My game ended when i fought and won against that guy at AMS Bank,I think it was Edward or something, then it restarted the game... Am i missing something? Plus my Arcive and Gallary arn't compleat...i'm so lost...can you help me? 2: I LOVE THIS STORY! Can you add to it? Please! |
Alatum Laminis chapter 1 . 9/2/2011 Wow. Actually a heterosexual Lux-Pain fic. |
Nobody's Home Anymore chapter 1 . 8/31/2011 OK, you really, REALLY need to work on your grammar and spelling. Really badly. I mean, it's a great story, but you just need to work harder in english class or something... you need to improve a bit. Nontheless, pretty good story, and I'm psyched that someone FINALLY put up another lux-pain fanfic! NO ONE'S BEEN DOIN' THAT LATELY! D'8 |