Aw this is lovely. :D Very sweet and adorable :)

But I don't think you should continue this. I feel like it's a wonderful PERFECT one-shot that should not be messed with :)

Great great job though. I really liked how you portrayed both Lily and james ;)

you know i really dont think i should review in light of past events but this story is just too good. AND its james/lily... all the better! i like it.. bunches

Awesome story so cute!

Aww, that was so awesome. It'd be great if you continued this, but I think it ended on a great note.