very good first chap, I alredy want to see the next one

it seem's interesting so im gonna watch out for till later Ch.

I love the part when Hinata kicked Neji's ass. Keep going.

Very interesting. Can't wait to see how things go from here

it is a good story to read and did the light go to naruto. did the light help naruto or hinata.

Pennam:

The beginning of the story is supposed to set the stage for the readers to want to know what's going on and why things happened the way they did. If everything was all explained in the first chapter it was make writing the story pointless. Use your brains already.

By the way Psycho G, great start to a new story. Update soon.

Great start to your new story, I will be looking forward to reading your next update

That didn't explain a damn thing as to what this story was about except for the fact that Jiraiya decided to do something with another families seal, instead of giving it to the one person who it belonged to, and damn near killed himself. I simply love how everyone forgets that anything with the Uzumaki or Namikaze clan belong to Naruto and decide to use it for themselves. Great story of thieves.

Don't quite get what's going on, so I'll have to wait and see how things develop from here on.

Just a few minor mistakes here and there, but nothing major. Otherwise a nice start.

It seems you have struck again. Looking forwardto your latest work.

so the seal stole some of Jiraya's awesomeness and transfered it to Naruto? WIN!

Well, this is an interesting start. I'll be looking forward to see how this plays out.