The time period between '16 August' and '7 October' would be seven weeks, three days, but otherwise, I love this story so far.

Poor Emmeline! She does NOT deserve to have her affection for Colonel Brandon exposed, IN FRONT OF HIM, by Mrs. Jennings, no matter how well meaning that lady might be!

I REALLY am enjoying this story, especially the last paragraph of '7 October'. However, the length of time between '16 August' and '7 October' is nearly two months, not just three weeks.

I LOVE this story! I agree with all your reviewers who wanted someone other than Marianne for the dear colonel.

I LOVE this story BUT the time period between 16 August and 7 October is about 5-1/2 weeks. In spite of this discrepancy, I consider this my FAVORITE Col. Brandon/OC story.

I really enjoyed your version. I always felt that Brandon was second place with Marianne and felt he deserved more.

Your heroine reminds me of Hermione Granger, so naturally she quickly had my full support!
Will I get shot if I said I loved your version better than the original? :P I mean I always thought that the colonel was too good for Marianne.. Thank you for a most awesome story!

so much fluff.

I liked the story :)

I have read this story many times and I enjoy it so much! Thank you for sharing it!

wow! i love your story...in retrospect I never thought that Marianne deserved the Coronel...

An excellent and tender ending. Thank you for writing.
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I love that you provided his perspective. Well done!
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At last! How lovely. :]
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Excellent yet heartbreaking. I hope that everything continues to smooth itself out.
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How exciting. I can only hope that Brandon chooses Em. :]
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