This was great! I especially loved the one where Amy and Mel's leave Rory tied up for ages. Maybe you should also do one where they're playing Blindman's Buff as kids and they leave Rory in a closet for ages? Like how they showed in the TV show?

Cue hysterical laughing to the point of tears.

Mia

So much pretty. You stun me.

Mia

d'aww, endlessly touching and adorable!

this is so good

aww, really sweet. love the interactions between the characters, esp with Mrs. Pond and Rory.

Aw, that is a perfect ending.

yeah, I'm completely lost, but this is entirely precious anyhow :D

God, I love these. Although I would have liked to see Rory deck the jerk. Still, he came after her so she wasn't alone, just as Amy said he would when Melody was a baby. And that image of Mrs. Pond putting her at around her unknown granddaughter's shoulders and bringing her into the house... so poignant.

Write more of these! :-)

I decided to hop in and look if there were any new chapters. I was Not dissapointed. Especially liked The eighth one, tough the "making of" that legendary Photo was a nice idea as well.

awesome chapter really good i love how subtle the fatherly bonf is but it is still there keep up the good work

I like your story. There is not enough of Mels, they're all about River.

I loved this chapter, it was so great because, yanno. Just because he's her dad. And it was great. :)

Good man, Rory.

Aw, River starts on her way early. Cleopatra, hm.