Pleas continue!
You can't do this to me. I'm begging you with all my life. I need to know what happens next. I can't get this out of my head.
Pleaaaaseeeee

Oh that was great. xx

I loved it. Would you ever consider making this a two-shot? Maybe even a full on story with multiple chapters? I'm surprised by how much i loved this pairing and normally infidelity makes me view a character in a negative light.. But this time I was hoping Bella would graciously die or move aside for the new couple.

Oh, did Mike die? This story is really good and the pairing is interesting. ) Not something one might expect.

It is nice to see Mike portrayedvin a positive light for a change.
Thanks for sharing your story.
Jen

EXQUISITE!

why'd you make him kill himself in the end

this was lovely, but did mike die at the end or what?

AMAZING!

This was so beautifully done. I loved the pairing - very unconventional but it worked. I could buy into the progression of their relationship, and the use of Mike's new powers was so awesome I can't even. Thanks so much for a beautiful o/s.

I cry so hard while reading this story. It was a really good and I love Mike in this. It really good writing.

Uh wow. I have not read any ffn for like, forever. Then today, after moving house yet again 2 days ago, decided I would pick something at random from my updates folder in email. And couldnt resist when I realised this was Mike/E. What a wonderfully written story, so very you in style - you have such a gift for creating a really rich atmosphere, and for making your pairings believable. I really loved it. And then I see you did so well in the backslash contest for it - of course. Well deserved. I am soooooooo behind the times I am somewhat embarrassed lol. Congrats anyway. We must catch up sometime xxx

I am shocked at how moved I was over an Edward & Mike pairing. Well done. This was a beautifully written piece and I'm very impressed with the fluid manner in which you managed to convincingly move their relationship forward in a one shot.

The end was particularly poignant. I'm torn between heartbreak over Edward's loss and faint hope that they might find each other again.

I never thought anyone would be able to make me like an Edward and Mike pairing. I was wrong. Not only do I like it, but I find myself wanting more of these two.

You made me sob my guts out. I cannot believe it. I loved it, fecking loved it. Well done, you've broken my heart in the best way. Fantastic.

That was interesting and wonderful! Thank you for sharing.