I really want to imagine what would be Severus Snape's reaction to someone named Severus Sirius. After both him and Sirius Black.

Good fic.
I like scorily as well.

First second-generation fix that ever made me feel like the kids were real people, not Mary-insert-Sues. Your Lily Luna feels like the real thing. And you managed to get canon characters ic as well (their core personalities the same even as they themselves are altered by age. Bravo. I love how you interpreted LL grappling with the distorted legend of LE, and how Severus Snape begs to differ. You even made me kinda like Scorpius.

I love your handling of Severus's portrait, as keeping him true to self is a struggle for so many authors.

The only thing I would change is the ending is a bit abrupt. I do wish that had been smoother.

Still, wonderfully done.

Enjoyed this very much. Love the way you fleshed out all the characters!

Very sweet, this. I like it!

sweet

Good story.

The reconciliation that the parents could never have happens through their children. I quite like the idea that Harry and Draco get over themselves.

This was amazing not what i expected but boy was it good thanks for posting this story XD

This one is incredible, as well! I've never sought out a post-Wizarding War fic since Severus and Lily are my primary focus. I read this one since it's yours, and it did not disappoint! Thank you for this story!

Very nice! Very sweet story!

I loved it, this story was amazing x

This is amazing but I don't quite understand how it got rated M? Anyway, wow, that was so good :) xx

Epic. Just plain epic. Totally showing my BFF!

Awww what an adorable story... Draco's speech was so touching that it made me cry...

THIS LINE:

Now she understood what Uncle Ron meant. Now she knew why her grandmum had rejected him. It wasn't because he was ugly: it was because he was a bloody bastard.

Sigh. So true.

This story was unmitigated awesome. And I thought Scorpius's characterization was spot on-still a Malfoy, but nice. A very delicate balance, and you pulled it off.

My only quibble is Lily's outburst about her grandmother not having Snape. A bit too strong, because I don't think Snape would have talked to her after that. He represses his emotions too much. If that makes sense.

Also, there were a few grammar mistakes.

In conclusion, great work. Reading it was like eating truffles.