I know this is supposed to be a really intense chapter and it was, but I can't stop thinking about how much of a bottom Moriarty is.

oh dear god please...please don't stop this. they are so... in a way frustrating in their efforts to be strong and yet cling to each otheers, yet so adorable and heartwarming. I wish i could see the two of them admitting to each others how they feel. in a situation when the other is not in danger of dying.
I know personal problems causes serious troubles with writing, living it too, so I understand. but I still hope that you will get to this again.
because the drama and emotions are breathtaking and mesmerizing and I can't help but grin, frown, laugh and curse according to how the characters are doing.
you got skill. I really mean it. thank you for writing this

the emotions were dazzling. I nejoyed greatly hearing how each one was reacting to what had happened and how each one was worried about something.
and for a very long moment I hated mycroft with all my soul. now I just dismiss him. I know he meant well but what he tried to do was still wrong. I thanked every possible deity I could think of that John heard all and managed to convince Sherlock not to "die"
it was once again Super great chapter.

ooh, thank god they are both alive. it surprised me that it took so long before John went to Sherlock. but it was adorable that Sherlock had tried to get to John at the cost of his own life.
and yes, it was touchy when they tried to hold hands and that Sherlock squeezed his fingers 3 I really wish I would have watched the show too... I feel like I have lost something really good.

I like cliffhangers. especially since I have the next chapter waiting ;D
what to say. this is gorgeous story

I think the backgroundstory fitted the story and explained why Sherlock turned the way he is now. of course I am nto the best to say but even if his family story would be revieled in the show it wouldn't matter because this works here.

oh my god you are awesome writer.
I have to admit that I haven't watched or read Holmes, but this make me want to if they are even half as good as your story.
I admire the well crafted plot with all the details in it. and the accurate and believable emotions and reactions of the people.
just amazed. you are great and this was again a great chapter

3 juzt loved that scene in the hallway! that was so perfect and emotional and fragile ans sweet and my heart burst and I bit my lip way too hard when I was reading it because it was so so touchy.
it felt so good to see that John finally realized that he can't let og of Sherlock (sad that he did. I kne whe was going to run) and it is so great that they kissed. and that he held Sherlock in his arms and kissed his forehead and swore never to let go of him.
oh, and I knew the nightly guest wasn't John. I knew he would not bite Sherlock that hard.
sooo, I'm guessing ti was moriarty in his twisted games. such a pervert.
mhhh. I think I am high as a kite after this chapter...
nooo! (only now read the last SH part.) who is that bloke and what is he going to do to Sherlock? keep your dirty mittens of of Holmes! he belongs to John! if only Sherlock would see that the first person he felt something was indeed John. he wouldn't haev felt like that and welcomed the touch had he not thought it was John. so, even though it wasn't John physically, it was mentally and that shuld be just good enough.
I hope...
thanks for the thrill!

aww, so awesome! I love the feelings in this story and this chapter particularly that showed just how much Sherlock is missing his dear Watson.
sorry my comments are so little, but I really like this and can't wait to read more :D

it was so nice when John left sarah just like that to go to Sherlock and that just seeing him made the leg work better again and took the pain away.
how good couple they would be if they could just be honest to themselves and each others.

it did came out well! it was fun (well, in a way) to see Sherlock stressed out and doing his best to save John.
and I liked the plot of the erica marshall's kidnapping. good story ;)

oh no, John slept with sarah! poor Sherlock, his companion is slowly being snatched away.
I can't believe John has managed to stay away from Sherlock all this time.
and Holmes is yearning after his doctor, that was so sweet in the ending with him thinking if John would have kissed him and cursed him. so sweet

wow, Sherlock really does have quite an impact on John. that scene when Sherlock passed him on the street was so well done I could nearly feel he shiwers too.
wonderful job

damn. you really are awesome.
I was meant to comment earlier but this was so captivating story that before I had time to think I was already eagerly reading the next chapter.
I don't have the right words for it but the emotions and situations are just so magnificent. they seem so real that I find myself biting my lip and holding my breath whenever john or Sherlock are in turmoil. and when they interact with each others that's just priceless.
I really love this. thank you

Oh this is so good! Please update soon! I'm so excited to see what happens with those two when they're isolated in the country with only each other to irritate. :)