Awesome story, great writing. I noticed it's been a long time but I hope there'll be more.

I was a little trepidatious about this story at first - but I loved how it ended!

Great idea, it could have been made in to something bigger, but I understand the need to get something out of your system and be done with it. Lucky for you you can do that and still end up with something wonderful(albeit too brief).

Love it!

Oh my gosh...

So freaking awesome.

Just... WOW.

This kind of storys are the ones that I enjoy the most, i feel the love and its amazing.

And it was a perfect ending. Just wow.

I am just reviewing to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It was a great mix of angst and humor and I loved every minute of it.

You can't see my obviously but I'm applauding. I loved this story, it was sweet and funny and made me feel all warm and tingly and ahhh I loved the ending, totally perfect (I'm a sucker for literary symmetry lol)

It was just basically all great :)

Thank you so mych for writing this. It was lovely.

God, that was actually painful. The angst in this is delicious.

...and it just keeps getting hotter! Man, I am SO glad I found this story!

Hot. Seriously hot.

Wow, this is really good! I stumbled on this as a fic rec on Tumblr and I'm so glad I checked it out. I'm not usually into future AU stories, but this one I think I'm gonna really enjoy.

Check it out, another cherry in the world. You're deadly, and I'm Vi. Heehee :P

Anyway. Both your stories are VERY epic! :D I hope this story isn't dead, but..yeah. :] Update soon? I know I'm only on chapter 1, but I hate waiting, and I'll probably finish it in the morning, sooo...hehe :) Thanks for sharing!

Love the Santana cameo

and daves line of only wanting to kiss Kurt. and I think it ended just right :)

really beautiful story

"Karofsky and Lopez, crime fighting Duo. It just rolls off the tongue." YES! You should totally write that! Okay, I had to get that off of my chest first lol. I liked this piece but I guess I wanted more. I know that isn't exactly constructive criticism and I don't really know what I would do to fix it...maybe just write more I guess. I loved what you wrote but it left me...unsatisfied? I don't know, it might be because I love David and maybe I just want a more fulfilling answer. Why did he write the book, why didn't he tell Kurt how he felt, why leave things the way he did. I feel like I got teased, I know a little bit of the answer to each of these questions, but it isn't enough. So...write more! Ha!

Kate

Lovely chapter...pleace mooore!

;))